Keith's Entrance

The character I created some months ago is finally entering into the world of comics! This is highly experimental, figuring out what style I want to do for a comic. Hence two very different styles. But for that, I was more going for an effect. =]

So uh, your verdict/suggestions?

I used many different resources of screentones and I feel bad for not keeping track. D: But they are found in my collection! [link]